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目标2008

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超级水水

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以逸待劳

哈哈 奥运是要进行地，策五啥样不知道地

得了吧

以下是引用司马大帝在2007-11-22 14:46:00的发言：
2008年吗？那先去看奥运了，奥运结束后，不知道策V是否还在经营中。

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以下是引用司马大帝在2007-11-22 14:46:00的发言：
2008年吗？那先去看奥运了，奥运结束后，不知道策V是否还在经营中。

奥运结束后，就迎来策VI了

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以下是引用江山如画在2007-11-22 13:03:00的发言：

您好

多谢指教~

哈哈，就是不改的说

骏枫

土匪以后还有好日子过没？请指教。。。。。

爱飞的云

以下是引用匪兵乙在2007-11-22 12:59:00的发言：

我当一次小学语文老师，帮学生批改作业。修改部分采用红色字体标注。

以下是引用江山如画在2007-11-22 12:34:00的发言：

您好（此处应该有“冒号”）

官方论坛活动（每个段落的首行应该先留2个字符空格，不能顶格写）是要到11月25号（应该为2008年11月25日）活动（此处表达不准确，容易产生歧义，应说明活动全称）结束后陆续发放，（此处应该用句号，以表示为一个完整的独立单句）封测帐号发放是有数量限制的，作品及账号经过审核后将100% （表达不规范、有歧义，可以替换为“确保”等同义词）领取《三国策V》珍贵封测号一个。而（实在不通顺，懒得改了，自己回去当课外作业重新做）各大合作媒体网站发放的帐号一般都是针对自己会员用户发放，有一定的要求，这些您可以去网上搜索相关内容，非常感谢您对我们策5（用词不规范，应该为策V）的关注和支持！

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